让读者读的
making the reader’s heart link with it
心有灵犀心领
understand it without having the meaning explained
神会欲罢不忍
and so he cannot help reading it.
欲言又止
Make them want to speak but be lost for words
比如写水写黄土
such as writing water writing loess
写春江花月夜
writing night of flowers and moonlit spring river
写小乔初嫁时
writing the new marriage of Xiaoqiao
写鱼和鸟是怎样
writing how the fish and bird
呼应着一个在天上飞
echoing each other -one is flying in the sky
一个在水里游把鱼
the other swimming in the water；the fish
写成鸟映在水里的影子
is described as the bird’s shadow mirrored in the water
把鸟写成
and the bird
会在水里飞行的鱼
is described as the fish that can fly in the water
借你七分才气
borrow some literary talents from you
来写诗我的诗
to write poetry my poetry
定会写的更大气
must be more grand
更开朗更富有哲理
more optimistic and more Philosophical
比如在六月
such as in June
我们把螳螂捕蝉的意境
we represent the prospect of the mantis stalking the cicada
写成一幅画把蝉写成
as a painting considering the cicada
有六条腿的战车
as a chariot with six legs
把虬髯突兀的树枝
and present the branches with a curly beard
写成巨蟒一样的
as a super expressway
高速公路这时的时空
which is like a huge python the space-time now
被我们无限放大放大到
are enlarged limitlessly by us
苍蝇是攻击机
the flies are attack planes
牛虻是歼击机腋下
the gadflies are fighter planes
挂着两个蜜桶的小蜜蜂
the little bees with two honey barrels each
是一群辗转在
are a crowds of remote bombers
两个大洲之间的远程轰炸机
passing through the two continents
这时肥美圆润的海狮
the plump sea-lions
当然就变成了可以执行
absolutely becoming nuclear submarines
海狼计划的核潜艇
that can carry out the Seawolf Plan
这时你的才气成就了一个
now your literary talent has
可以进行立体作战的
accomplished a compound army group which can be used in
合成军团我说的当然不是
three-dimensional warfare of course what I mean
我的团长我的团中的
is not the Sichuan Army Group
那个川军团我说的是一个
in My Regimental Commander and My Regiment what I mention
装备精良的具有
is a modern army group
强大攻击力的
well-equipped
现代化集团军
and with powerful attack strength
这时我们的诗歌
at this time our poetry
当然更大气更有风骨
is certainly more grand with more strength of character
这时我们的诗歌
at this time our poetry
让女人读起来
reads more appealingly
更为之动容让男人读起来
for women more heart-burning
更热血沸腾这时的我们
for men at this moment we
当然可以借诗歌威力
certainly can begin a war
虚拟一场战争我们
assisted by the strength of poetry
并肩作战并有决心
we fight side by side and have a determination
打赢这场战争我是说
to win the war I mean
你要再借我一份胆儿
if you can lend me some courage
2009-3-21南京湖南路88号
March 21st，2009，No.88Hunan Road in Nanjing
（Translated by Yang Yuru &；Hu Zongfeng）
005首：抬月
Statue 5：Lifting the Moon
——和广东诗人黄礼孩谈第三极创作
A discussion of the Third Level of creation with Guangdong poet Huang Lihai
和我的影
with my shadow
小心翼翼的
so carefully
抬着月亮
I lift the Moon
从东
walking from East
往西走
to West
还没爬上
before climbing up
前面的
the loess hill
黄土岗
in front
月亮就被
a piece of the Moon
颠掉一块
tipped to fall down
穿过一片
going through
小树林影
a small woods the shadow
告诉我
tells me that
圆圆的月亮
a piece of the round moon
被高高的树梢
is caught
挂掉一块
by the high treetop
现在开始下坡
the shadow and mine
我和影
now begin to downhill
一不小心
uncarefully
月亮又被
another piece of the moon
颠掉一块
tipped to fall down
马上就要到家了
about to get home
我回头
I turn back
惊奇的发现
seeing with surprise that
影早已躺在
the shadow has already lain
明晃晃的
on the gleaming
月牙床上
crescent moon bed
睡着了
Asleep
2009-4-20六步居
April 20，2009at Liubuju
（Translated by Yang Yuru &；Hu Zongfeng）
