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范文欣赏

Travel-mate Wanted

I’m a 19-year-old female sophomore named Fu Ping.I hereby earnestly invite a foreign young lady—college student preferred—to make a three-week touring trip with me.

My plan is to set off next weekend,when the summer vacation officially begins.The frst stop is Kunming,the world-renowned city for its beauty and mildtemperature.We‘ll get there by train and stay there for 2days,and then we’ll head for Jinggangshan,a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot.After a 3-day visit there,we will take a long-distance coach to a nearby port city by the Yangtze River and board a downstream ship to Shanghai,so that we can enjoy the great scenery alongside the third longest river in the world.As everybody knows,Shanghai is the busiest and fastest developing city in China.I‘d like to have a look at its prosperity,so the stay there will be about half a week.And a famous Chinese saying goes,“Just as there is Paradise in heaven,there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on Earth”,so a 4-day visit to these two cities near Shanghai is necessary.All together,our trip will last about three weeks.

I only expect that my travel-mate could split the expenses with me and talk with me in beautiful English,and I would be an excellent guide for her since I major in tourist guiding.

Those interested please contact me either through email(fuping@126.com)or phone call(52222221).

妙语评析:在启示的第一段先交代这则启示的目的——找外国朋友做游伴。第二段把自己的计划做详细介绍,在这为期三周的时间内要去哪些地方,做哪些事情都要交代清楚,最后可以将自己对对方的要求进行说明,然后注明联系方式。

句型模板

1.My plan is_____

2.The frst stop is_____

3.and then we’ll head for_____

4.After a_____visit there,we will take a long-distance coach to_____

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Topic

My plan is_____The frst stop is_____and then we‘ll head for_____After a_____visit there,we will take a long-distance coach to_____so that we can enjoy_____As everybody knows,_____is the busiest and fastest developing city in China.

I only expect that_____Those interested please contact me_____

Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30miutes to write a letter applying for admission in a company.You write at least 150words

范文欣赏

Dear Managers,

I am very grateful for you to give me another job in the company.Thinking about the good opportunity you offer to me each time,I am really moved.What words should I say?It seems that words on this special occasion fail to express me.All in all,I just want to say“many many thanks for all your kindness and consideration.”

However,I can not accept the job you offer to me.I think,there are at least three personal reasons for this.First,I can not make full use of my major which I learned at college,though you pay much attention to me.Second,I have a habit to challenge myself.If a job or learning seems to lose the meaning of challenge,I will have to quit and fnd a challenging one for me.Third,I am not used to working in the same place for a long time.I want to have more working experiences and know a lot of different people.Therefore,I can not accept your offer.

Above all,I also want to express my deep appreciation of your understanding of my decision.I think there are other qualified personnel in our company who you should give a chance.If each potential employee in our company can have a chance to prove themselves for our company,I think,the company will become a more and more competitive company and will become more and more popular because of our smart strategy in employing qualifed workers.I wish the bright future for our company.

Best wishes for you all!

Yours sincerely,

Tom

妙语评析:第一段首先对该公司提供工作给我表示感谢,第二段开始讲述自己不能接受这份工作的理由,最后提出自己对公司的良好祝愿。

句型模板

1.I am very grateful for_____

2.What words should I say?It seems that_____

3.All in all,I just want to say_____

4.I think,there are at least three personal reasons for this._____

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Dear Managers,

I am very grateful for_____What words should I say?It seems that_____

All in all,I just want to say_____I think,there are at least three personal reasons for this._____First,_____Second,_____Therefore,_____

Above all,I also want to_____

Yours sincerely,

XXX

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 150words.

范文欣赏

A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper

June 20th,2004

Dear Mr./Miss Editor,

I am a student from Tsinghua University and I am writing to you about my experience of buying a dictionary and my complaint about the service of a bookstore.

It was about a month ago.I went to a bookstore nearby the university to buy an English dictionary.It was only after I paid for the dictionary and returned to school that I found some pages were missing.But when I went back to the bookstore to tell them about the matter,they said that I should have checked the dictionary before Ileft the store.According to them,it was my fault and they hold no responsibility for the whole matter.

What I want to say is that sincerity and enthusiasm are vital to the survival of service industries in such a market economy featured by fierce competition.It was quite easy for them to change the dictionary for me but they refused to do so.They will lose all customers if they persist in doing so.I hope that this letter can draw the attention of the whole society and that the problem can be solved as soon as possible.

Best regards.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

妙语评析:首先在第一段说明自己写信的目的,然后在第二段把自己买书的经历和遇到的问题进行详细阐述,并把自己对这件事的看法说明了,以获得读者对此事的关注。

句型模板

1.I am writing to you about_____

2.It was only after_____

3.What I want to say is that_____

全文模板

Dear XXX,

I am writing to you about_____It was about_____ago.It was only after_____I found_____

What I want to say is that_____It was quite easy for them to_____I hope that_____

Best regards.

Yours sincerely

XXX

A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

范文欣赏

January 12th,2002

Dear Mr.President,

I am a sophomore from Department 3and I am writing to you about the food and service in the canteen on campus.

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